The title is very specific and all of the fonts have equal weight. These choices can both direct viewers down a certain data story path while also causing confusion on where to focus first and subsequently.

The title supports viewers exploring all of the data. Font size and boldness create a visual path to support the title.

Distortion of divisions can result in false conclusions about the data.

Use consistent scale divisions so the viewer easily understands the layout.

Visual clutter, such as unnecessary dark lines and fancy fonts, detract viewers attention from the data.

By eliminating unnecessary words or visuals and using concise, accurate language with fonts that are easy to read, the viewer can easily focus on the data.

By using a number of unnecessary competing colors, the viewer might waste time deciphering which color goes with what data when they don't need to.

Color is used sparingly and is the same to show that the data has equal importance. Non-text contrast ratio of at least 3:1 is suggested for accessibility by WCAG 2.1. (See References & Resources > Accessibility & Color to learn more about color and accessibility.)

Don’t start with 0 always, depending on the data, shift the starting point of the y-axis.

In this case, you need to adjust the axis start point. You are trying to highlight the mid-range. Think of it as using a magnifying glass on the mid-range to highlight the pattern.